Scarlett O'Hara
Not Elda in the Red Dress
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This is a collaborative chapter by Scarlett and Cnaeus Valerius
“Myself.” came the simple reply. Surl was stunned and sat quietly waiting on further explanation. After a couple of minutes and another bottle of water, D’Nel began to talk. “I’ve waited too long to give the order to attack the Sonjon. I have become too focused on getting just the right assets into the right positions, with fully trained crews. Meanwhile, the Sonjon have continued to get stron....”
“"Meanwhile...." Surl emphatically interrupted "...you have helped locate science crews and provide them with our best technology to search for a cure of the famine and illnesses that plague our worlds. It was you who convinced everyone to contribute their shares of the profit from the Rim worlds we helped to open which provided us with the credits we needed to buy untainted foods from neutral space. The plan you developed to enable warships loyal to us to secretly depart from their patrols in order to move food to starving planets..."
D’Nel, just as emphatically, interrupted “And the Sonjon grow stronger! I am fooling myself and all of you as well. It will take us several generations to get enough assets to attack the Sonjon directly!”
Surl seemed to look completely shocked. The muscles in his forehead gave the impression of raised eyebrows cocked with incredulity. “That has never been our plan, Warlord! You and the rest of us have always known that we can not defeat them in a few major battles! We must do it with quick hit and run attacks, keeping them off-balance. We’ve known that we must simply out last them. The populace will eventually become unstable with food shortages and other atrocities and they will rise up. Then we’ll have the popular directive we need to take on the military directly. Once the military is defeated, we’ll disperse the old government and bring in the new one.” Surl’s voice was full of confidence as if he lectured a schoolroom of children.
D'Nel laid his head back against the wall and his voice held deep sadness to it when he finally spoke. "And that is what I will have to tell my son one day? That I conducted guerilla warfare while our enemies flaunted their power in the shameless abuse of the populace? I will have to tell him that the burden of righting this wrong was too great for me to solve and that his son will have to finish what I had so poorly begun? I feel no honor in this, Surl."
"Never confuse honor with stupidity!" Surl quoted with mock pomposity.
"The Darkness of Space will surely swallow any wretched Appian warriors who use my own words against me..." D'Nel muttered but there was no heat in his words. Surl merely grinned knowingly and pressed on with his point.
"You’ve also stated repeatedly that if we simply replace one government with another, and don’t do it with the support of the masses, then we’re no better than the Sonjon.” Surl stood and began to pace. D’Nel’s eyes followed him as he drank two more bottles of water and then started on a fruit juice.
After several long minutes of silence between them, D’Nel said softly “You quote my most frequent arguments back to me. You and the others are always ‘with’ me. I never hear a dissenting vote.”
Surl’s voice was deep and booming as he turned angrily to his friend, "Perhaps because we are still convinced that our mission is just and the path we have chosen through the Sacred Void is the correct one!"
Looking calmly up at the Appian warrior, D'Nel added sadly "Perhaps I am no longer quite so convinced..."
Still seething with his own anger, Surl nearly bellowed “Then, Warlord, you have a problem. You should be asking yourself when you became unsure and what was behind the change of mind!”
Without having to think through it, D'Nel answered matter-of-factly "When I was promoted to Fleet WarMaster Admiral." He paused to take a large gulp of fruit juice and added, "I began to think we could change things from within, peacefully. None know better than both our peoples that the price of civil war is always a high one."
The sound that erupted from Surl sounded like a critically wounded gafta bear from the Draksan frontier. D’Nel briefly thought about the first one he had killed as a young man, with his father’s help. But Surl’s trembling voice brought him from his reverie. “Yes, I saw the change then as well. I first thought it was a bad omen. But then I realized your promotion was a blessing for all of us. You now had access to the entire fleet and personnel. Especially with your....” Surl suddenly darkened, as if his nearly uttered statement and thoughts had embarrassed or troubled him.
"Especially with my.....what?" D'Nel arched an eyebrow and cocked his head to one side. He motioned for Surl to continue with his thought.
“I thought your affai...affiliation with the General was part of your plan to manipulate the military personnel through her Chief of Staff position.” Surl’s voice was suddenly very low, very controlled again. He realized he had just committed the one thing that could ruin his friendship with D’Nel Ghar. He was shocked when D’Nel leaned his head back and roared with laughter.
“Actually that was my plan!” Seeing the surprise on Surl’s face, D’Nel laughed so hard, he couldn’t drink any more juice. “But the truth? I didn‘t think of it until the morning of my promotion ceremony. Seeing that the Chief of Staff was the woman I had spent the night with, gave me the idea. It took less than a day of discreetly talking to other officers to discover that she had no power base among the Royal Houses. The only reason she was there was because the Shahidan had spent several tours of duty with her and trusted her to protect his back.”
Surl stared gaping at D’Nel who calmly resumed drinking large gulps of cold fruit juice. Finally, D’Nel added “I decided she’d be an asset I could use to our advantage. That’s why I put the Appian guards on her, among other reasons. I didn’t want my new asset being assassinated before I got the information and assistance she could deliver.” Another chuckle and D'Nel added as an afterthought "I can't believe that was just over seven solar months ago!"
“What happened to the plan?” Surl asked innocently.
D’Nel shrugged and drank the rest of the juice. “Plans change.” He grew quiet, twirling the small empty bottle in his hands as if he were studying it. Under his breath he added nearly inaudibly “She became Ela-N’ssi-Raballa.”
Surl asked “What is Ela-N’ssi-Raballa?”
D’Nel snapped around and stared at the Appian. He hadn’t realized he had said it out loud. “It’s...a Draksan thing.” he summarized. Clearly, his tone told Surl that nothing else was to be said on the subject.
“Myself.” came the simple reply. Surl was stunned and sat quietly waiting on further explanation. After a couple of minutes and another bottle of water, D’Nel began to talk. “I’ve waited too long to give the order to attack the Sonjon. I have become too focused on getting just the right assets into the right positions, with fully trained crews. Meanwhile, the Sonjon have continued to get stron....”
“"Meanwhile...." Surl emphatically interrupted "...you have helped locate science crews and provide them with our best technology to search for a cure of the famine and illnesses that plague our worlds. It was you who convinced everyone to contribute their shares of the profit from the Rim worlds we helped to open which provided us with the credits we needed to buy untainted foods from neutral space. The plan you developed to enable warships loyal to us to secretly depart from their patrols in order to move food to starving planets..."
D’Nel, just as emphatically, interrupted “And the Sonjon grow stronger! I am fooling myself and all of you as well. It will take us several generations to get enough assets to attack the Sonjon directly!”
Surl seemed to look completely shocked. The muscles in his forehead gave the impression of raised eyebrows cocked with incredulity. “That has never been our plan, Warlord! You and the rest of us have always known that we can not defeat them in a few major battles! We must do it with quick hit and run attacks, keeping them off-balance. We’ve known that we must simply out last them. The populace will eventually become unstable with food shortages and other atrocities and they will rise up. Then we’ll have the popular directive we need to take on the military directly. Once the military is defeated, we’ll disperse the old government and bring in the new one.” Surl’s voice was full of confidence as if he lectured a schoolroom of children.
D'Nel laid his head back against the wall and his voice held deep sadness to it when he finally spoke. "And that is what I will have to tell my son one day? That I conducted guerilla warfare while our enemies flaunted their power in the shameless abuse of the populace? I will have to tell him that the burden of righting this wrong was too great for me to solve and that his son will have to finish what I had so poorly begun? I feel no honor in this, Surl."
"Never confuse honor with stupidity!" Surl quoted with mock pomposity.
"The Darkness of Space will surely swallow any wretched Appian warriors who use my own words against me..." D'Nel muttered but there was no heat in his words. Surl merely grinned knowingly and pressed on with his point.
"You’ve also stated repeatedly that if we simply replace one government with another, and don’t do it with the support of the masses, then we’re no better than the Sonjon.” Surl stood and began to pace. D’Nel’s eyes followed him as he drank two more bottles of water and then started on a fruit juice.
After several long minutes of silence between them, D’Nel said softly “You quote my most frequent arguments back to me. You and the others are always ‘with’ me. I never hear a dissenting vote.”
Surl’s voice was deep and booming as he turned angrily to his friend, "Perhaps because we are still convinced that our mission is just and the path we have chosen through the Sacred Void is the correct one!"
Looking calmly up at the Appian warrior, D'Nel added sadly "Perhaps I am no longer quite so convinced..."
Still seething with his own anger, Surl nearly bellowed “Then, Warlord, you have a problem. You should be asking yourself when you became unsure and what was behind the change of mind!”
Without having to think through it, D'Nel answered matter-of-factly "When I was promoted to Fleet WarMaster Admiral." He paused to take a large gulp of fruit juice and added, "I began to think we could change things from within, peacefully. None know better than both our peoples that the price of civil war is always a high one."
The sound that erupted from Surl sounded like a critically wounded gafta bear from the Draksan frontier. D’Nel briefly thought about the first one he had killed as a young man, with his father’s help. But Surl’s trembling voice brought him from his reverie. “Yes, I saw the change then as well. I first thought it was a bad omen. But then I realized your promotion was a blessing for all of us. You now had access to the entire fleet and personnel. Especially with your....” Surl suddenly darkened, as if his nearly uttered statement and thoughts had embarrassed or troubled him.
"Especially with my.....what?" D'Nel arched an eyebrow and cocked his head to one side. He motioned for Surl to continue with his thought.
“I thought your affai...affiliation with the General was part of your plan to manipulate the military personnel through her Chief of Staff position.” Surl’s voice was suddenly very low, very controlled again. He realized he had just committed the one thing that could ruin his friendship with D’Nel Ghar. He was shocked when D’Nel leaned his head back and roared with laughter.
“Actually that was my plan!” Seeing the surprise on Surl’s face, D’Nel laughed so hard, he couldn’t drink any more juice. “But the truth? I didn‘t think of it until the morning of my promotion ceremony. Seeing that the Chief of Staff was the woman I had spent the night with, gave me the idea. It took less than a day of discreetly talking to other officers to discover that she had no power base among the Royal Houses. The only reason she was there was because the Shahidan had spent several tours of duty with her and trusted her to protect his back.”
Surl stared gaping at D’Nel who calmly resumed drinking large gulps of cold fruit juice. Finally, D’Nel added “I decided she’d be an asset I could use to our advantage. That’s why I put the Appian guards on her, among other reasons. I didn’t want my new asset being assassinated before I got the information and assistance she could deliver.” Another chuckle and D'Nel added as an afterthought "I can't believe that was just over seven solar months ago!"
“What happened to the plan?” Surl asked innocently.
D’Nel shrugged and drank the rest of the juice. “Plans change.” He grew quiet, twirling the small empty bottle in his hands as if he were studying it. Under his breath he added nearly inaudibly “She became Ela-N’ssi-Raballa.”
Surl asked “What is Ela-N’ssi-Raballa?”
D’Nel snapped around and stared at the Appian. He hadn’t realized he had said it out loud. “It’s...a Draksan thing.” he summarized. Clearly, his tone told Surl that nothing else was to be said on the subject.
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