I hear you, but one of the things sf&f readers have over many others, I think, is a highly developed intuitiveness. There are only so many ways left to try to twist and turn a plot and surprise the reader.
Not to mention of course we know she's going to come out on top. The prologue has a tale about her. She's a hero. The trilogy is about how the hero became a hero. As PeterWilliam said, there's still many twists and turns an author can take the hero on the way to victory. I mean, did you really doubt that Luke Skywalker would win? I didn't, not for a second. Did I ever think Frodo and Sam were going to fail? Nope. They had to, otherwise the good guys would lose. Do I think Harrison Ford is not going to find his children at the end of whatever film he's doing? Nope. He's going to do it.
As cliche as it is, it's not the destination that matters, but the journey.
I liked that Moon chose to tell the story of Paks, not as the Hidden Heir Chosen to Rule, but rather she who finds the Hidden Heir Chosen to Rule.
I liked the stuff with Kuakgan (Oakhollow) a lot, thought some good interaction occurred between he and Paks.
, then he gets kidnapped and saved in what seemed an unequally swift time.
Well, yes and no.being tortured, right? That's how she saves him, by offering herself? I don't know if I could have handled that being a longer scene. She suffered enough.
