But the power balance starts with the women in subjugated roles, and not all women begin as prostitutes. I understand that the development of the female characters shows that there is more to them than meets the eye, but it is still a flaw in the book.
This is very point I'm disputing. I'm not saying you're wrong - to many have made the complaint for me to assume that - I'm just saying I don't understand the justification. I'm really not that prickly about my work - there's all kinds of things I
ache to rewrite in
The Darkness That Comes Before, but this isn't one of them.
The assumption here is that I'm violating some kind of criterion for the representation of women. From what you say, that criterion seems to be something like: 'female characters should fairly represent
all the types found in human societies.' But that can't be, can it? Are there actually
rules determining character selection?
It seems clear this isn't the case. But since characters serve both theme and story, it's not simply a free-for-all either. In this case, I think my female characters are actually quite ideal. It's a war narrative set in a fantasy world that strives to be as historical as possible. Prostitutes and concubines are a natural fit.
We moderns keep returning to premodern fantasy worlds, I think, precisely because these are the kinds of worlds we tend to cook up for ourselves in the absence of scientific discipline. They resonate with us at some fundamental level. But rather than give readers a sentimentalized, thoroughly sanitized version of this 'lost world,' I wanted to give them an example of what such a prescientific world - given the way we humans are -
might really look like. I wanted to explore all the ugliness - the brutality, the inequity, the misogyny, the racism - with the wonder. And I wanted to do it with an eye for detail and depth that rivalled Tolkien.
The idea was to pack something as cruel as our real premodern world into our epic fantasy expectations, as if to say, "Here are the wages of your wonder."
Sorry, Leiali, I didn't mean that to turn into a diatribe!