Just finished
The Adamantine Palace by Stephen Deas last night. At around 3am, 2 hours later than I planned to sleep.
A quite fast paced book, containing two main alternating, somewhat loosly intertwined story lines that both keep you interested make it hard to put it down and stop reading. The action is kickstarted right in the first few pages with the murder of a Queen and is but one little move in the play of the intriguing and scheming game of the nobility. The speaker, a kind of arbitrator or ultimate ruler above all Kings of the assorted realms dwelling in the Adamantine Palace is about to name a successor and many of the major Kings and Queens with their assorted Princes and Princesses have long been scheming and pacting to ascertain their goals.
During that dangerous times, a perfect white dragon, a beautiful rarity meant as wedding gift from Queen Shazira to Prince Jehal and her escort gets attacked by an unknown band of dragon riders and the white dragon is lost. While search parties are looking for the invaluable dragon, only few know the true value or danger that the loss of that one dragon heralds.
Most heard critic of the book is its brevity, especially regarding the fact that there's a lot of characters we're introduced to, basically a lot of royal actors of one kind or another, some of which though are disposed of in the course of the political story line. I personally did not have a problem with the character development (or lack thereof due to the brevity) or the fact that there were quite many actors during the 370 or so pages. Action is fast paced and we learn a bit about some of them, with always enough unspoken to leave one wondering how far they are willing to go in pursuit of their goals.
More could have been written about the characters, undoubtly, but I rather found the world or its history more lacking in detailing than the characters. I feel that part of that has to be this way in order to keep up some of the mystery about the past or legends, but in other parts, there should have been some more background information pertaining to the region where the story line's playing out right now or about the world in general. After reading through it I still don't really know where all the proper realms really lie, how near the places of the story are or how big I have to imagine the Worldspine region, in relation to the other realms we touched upon.
Now this is a disappointment on a very high level. Essentially it means "But we would have wanted more". In a way, that's a compliment and speaks well for that which is there. So now I have to wait for the next book in the series, which as far as I know, hasn't gotten a name yet (the series), and I expect a little more background story and character development there. After all, the stage has now been set and the world is in a quite interesting position with political and racial unrest just about to happen. I am certainly going to keep an eye out for the next installment. The Adamantine Palace is a great, fast book and it has all the signs to turn into an awesome series.
Fun little quirk: I almost didn't pick this one up and put it on my mental ignore list. Because of its cover. I saw the book displayed quite prominently read the title and authors name, trying to remember it ("never heard of him") and just thought "Yeah what a cheesy way, just put a dragon on it and people are going to buy it. Not with me.". And I am a sucker for dragons. So I didn't even touch it or read the back. It wasn't until later I read about it here in this forum that I decided to give it a chance and I'm glad I did. But the cover picture, while fitting and beautiful (although I now claim that the dragon is wrongly colored) just instinctively felt way cheesy and put me off. Weird, as it's not a bad cover at all, it just doesn't work with me somehow.
Lastly, the dragons are quite interesting, but talking much about them quickly gets into deep spoiler territory, so I just refer to the the books main thread here:
http://www.sffworld.com/forums/showthread.php?t=20927 for more and better reviews than I can write.