BrightStar
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Or cover it with brown paper and tape....
I've been thinking about doing something just like that.
It's a shame there's something of a recurring theme with the designs of those front covers, and as my boyfriend pointed out earlier today, this is actually something of a trend in many fantasy romance novels as well, it seems.
And I'm still trying to figure out why none of these book covers show the guys without much of a head!
Unfortunately though, as for the book itself, it's starting to feel like a bit of a letdown, so maybe I won't be buying the rest of the series afterall. It was entertaining at first, but now...
Well, there's some decidedly laughably poor dialogue; notably, numerous attempts to add a bit of sexual tension between the characters that just comes accross as stupid and immature.
The characters, (who seemed interesting to begin with) have failed to really grow beyond the first impressions of them: the main male character (I forgot his name), for example, is protective, uncivilized, jealous, grouchy, etc, etc. And his other brothers barely manage enough of a personality between the seven of them! None of the characters seem to have particularly strong, or deep motivations for doing anything. The woman, Kelly, for example, has suddenly become ridiculously obsessed with cleaning and knitting!!
And I'm wondering why on earth the author thinks I'd want to read a book in which the main conflict is basically all about doing chores/house work: with the guys stubbornly refusing to be "untamed" and determined to remain as uncivilized as ever, whilst the woman yells and screams, stamps her feet, calls them names and even practically twists one of their arms in an effort to persuade them otherwise...
The plot itself, which started our promising, has basically devolved into an excuse for the male lead to lust after the female character, the temptation made all the more difficult for him because of a prophesized doom that should befall him if he should fall in love with her. Meanwhile, there's a bit of rivalry amongst the brothers and plenty of excuses for the male lead's jealousy to be stirred.
It's all very cliche, and I have to say that I'm feeling very dissapointed. After being majorly let down by the Tairen Soul series, which went from a story with strong (and loveable) characters, wonderful conflict, and excellent worldbuilding to something that was dull, tedious, and predictable, I'd sort of decided that romantic fantasy wasn't for me --- I want something more intelligent, bah!
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