briruc
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SteveF: Cunning technique to bookend some gentle criticism/observations with praise! Some interesting (and reasonable) thoughts there. I suppose I should spoiler tag my response to a couple of them, for the sake of consistency:
re: Kennet and his depression - in a sense I actually agree with you that I could have done more with Kennet, and I certainly agree that it would be interesting to have a fully-realised fantasy hero who suffered from accurately depicted depression. (I'm not quite sure how enjoyable it would be read, mind you.) That would be a challenging book to write, and it's not quite what I was aiming for with Winterbirth, but I obviously did make a conscious decision to include a 'medically' depressed minor character, and tried to make the depiction of that condition and its effects reasonably realistic, so it's nice you thought it sufficiently noteworthy to comment on.
And re: the question of black and white, 'baddies' etc. - no, you're right, I see pretty much all of the characters/factions in shades of grey. If the balance doesn't quite work for you yet, that's fair enough. I get what you mean about the reader's sympathies being dependent on chance encounters - though to an extent that reflects the book's tone, in that chance and circumstance play as big a role as 'right and wrong' - but I am hoping/aiming to drum up at least a smidgeon of reader sympathy for just about everyone by the end of the trilogy (even the White Owls!). I may or may not succeeed, of course!
And re: the question of black and white, 'baddies' etc. - no, you're right, I see pretty much all of the characters/factions in shades of grey. If the balance doesn't quite work for you yet, that's fair enough. I get what you mean about the reader's sympathies being dependent on chance encounters - though to an extent that reflects the book's tone, in that chance and circumstance play as big a role as 'right and wrong' - but I am hoping/aiming to drum up at least a smidgeon of reader sympathy for just about everyone by the end of the trilogy (even the White Owls!). I may or may not succeeed, of course!

