June 2016 Flash Fiction Contest: The suitcase

[JonLaidlow]

Hmmm, you just wait mister!

 

[kennychaffin]

Exactly!

 

[BrooklynSkye]

I'm missing out on so much conversation being on vacation.... I need to check in more often

 

[kennychaffin]

I'm missing out on so much conversation being on vacation.... I need to check in more often

Yeah ya do.

 

[WyrvenGuard]

didn't we already do "leftovers"?

Not me, im still fairly new to the contests

 

[WyrvenGuard]

WOOOOOO! I finally completed the first VERY rough draft of the story I'm going to go with. Had a few duds that I threw away but I just need to edit this sucker up and we'll be golden!

 

[kennychaffin]

WOOOOOO! I finally completed the first VERY rough draft of the story I'm going to go with. Had a few duds that I threw away but I just need to edit this sucker up and we'll be golden!

Sounds like a closed case!

 

[WyrvenGuard]

Sounds like a closed case!

Almost! lol

 

[kennychaffin]

Did an edit on mine....reworked many spots and dropped by 18 words.
Not certain it is finished will probably let it sit and do another edit over the weekend.

Just re-read the drabble version....it definitely needs work......
......reworked it.
gonna let 'em sit, maybe do one more edit over the weekend then it's on to something new, something bigger, something more squirrelly!

 

[kennychaffin]

All my bags are packed I'm ready to go. I hate to wake you up, but here you go!

After multiple revisions yesterday, today and probably tomorrow here you go my entries.

A Gathering of Ducks and Dead Cats

If I did my math right, 957 + 100 = 1057

Disqualify me if you must @JonLaidlow, but always remember the squirrels!
Freeeeeedoooooom!

 

[VictorK]

I don't think I'm gonna make this one. First one I've missed where I wasn't the host in over a year. Was hoping to write today but it was a disaster of a day.

 

[kennychaffin]

I don't think I'm gonna make this one. First one I've missed where I wasn't the host in over a year. Was hoping to write today but it was a disaster of a day.

At least several days didn't gang up on you all at once!

 

[Facing]

I don't think I'm gonna make this one. First one I've missed where I wasn't the host in over a year. Was hoping to write today but it was a disaster of a day.

Sorry to hear that. I wish you a better tomorrow.

 

[WyrvenGuard]

In under the deadline with - A Dangerous Game

 

[kennychaffin]

In under the deadline with - A Dangerous Game

Whoop! Whoop! Whoop!

 

[WyrvenGuard]

I don't think I'm gonna make this one. First one I've missed where I wasn't the host in over a year. Was hoping to write today but it was a disaster of a day.

 

[JonLaidlow]

Hmm if @VictorK has something in the trunk that might benefit from a suitcase added in the background, we could read that? I did say it could just be a brief mention of the suitcase...

 

[kennychaffin]

We should have a 'anything goes' theme sometime....

 

[Facing]

We should have a 'anything goes' theme sometime....

Are still trying to bring back "leftovers"?

 

[kennychaffin]

Are still trying to bring back "leftovers"?

No reruns!!! No leftovers!!!!! New writing!!!