I'm actually having less and less patience these days for writers who take that long for their story to really get going....
... "Your story does not start on page fifty. It does not start on page 100. It starts on page one, paragraph one, word one."
You know, it's funny, as soon as I submitted my reply, I thought, "If I received this reply, I would say something like, "I have no patience for stories that take too long to get going."
And that's exactly what you said. But I'm not sure that's exactly what I meant, the more I think about it, especially for
Garden of Stones. Because I agree with you. If I'm not hooked quickly, I get bored, then I read slower, and then I feel cheated, and then I put the book down for good. For a fantasy reader who is relatively well versed in the genre, there are elements in GoS of both the familiar and the foreign. Some of the trappings of epic fantasy are in place. Then there are the "storm rifles" that end up shooting not bullets, but bolts of some kind. Not an over-used idea in fantasy as you say. There are elements of the cultures he creates that are familiar, but I found they were generally new ideas, at least to me, and that took some getting used to. The names, of course, take some getting used to, and they are just on this side of the line of "you're just stringing letters together in an fantastic way" for me. But there was a rythym and grace and sense to them after a bit. The maps and glossary helped too. I hate myself for writing this but his "magic system" is pretty cool (it makes me sound like a Sanderson fan boy...) with how it uses (albeit in fantastic ways) the way we understand physics to actually work. It just pushes way past the limits of what we know of as possible.
I could go on and on, but all this is to say, it took me about 150 pages to get familiar with Barnes' created world, not to get hooked on his story. I was hooked on the story way earlier than that. But isn't that the nature of the best fantasy writing? That it isn't familiar, that it isn't our world, that it isn't easy to understand right off the bat, and that characters aren't named "Bob," but rather, "Amonindris?" Remember what it was like when you first read LotR or WoT.
The Garden of Stones made me feel like I was entering another world that would give me the same feelings those books gave me, and I really liked feeling that. There is both something old and something new school about Barnes, and that's refreshing. All the way up until the end, I legitimately didn't know what was going to happen and it had me on the edge of my seat. That was exciting. And, in the end, the story was clearly not over. It was not a case of an author writing a stand alone to sell, and then trying to turn it into a trilogy. I get why authors do that, so ai respect an author who declares right from the first book, "this is part of a larger whole. It has a sense and a cohesion within itself, but the story is far from over."
Maybe as I've gotten older (and let's be honest, I'm not ancient, but I am 33 with two kids under 4, a wife, and a full time job, which I think qualifies me to be a real adult) I lost my patience with books that ask too much of me, the reader, in order to understand them. I gave up on Malazan after book 3 with no regrets. But Barnes' story tapped into something for me that I enjoyed; in so doing, it asked just enough of me that I was willing to give it, and was well rewarded.
This went on longer than I intended, so thanks for reading and commenting. I hope I was able to clarify what I meant by giving it some time.
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