Finished Grace of Kings, the hyped novelistic debut of Ken Liu; here is my Goodreads review starting with the conclusion:
"Overall - ingenious and impressive world building with a realistic sense of how power works, but a detached, mostly impersonal, chronicle style writing that lacks power and renders the novel kind of forgettable with characters that could have been very impressive if shown but not mostly told so
superb world building - here the hype and accolades are utterly justified - and a fairly "realistic" storyline which can be summed to "power corrupts" as pretty much all the characters who come into it succumb to temptation to impose their own way of thinking on the world even with the best of motives ("unify the land to avoid ceaseless war and suffering", "restore the traditions", "give truly power to the less well off" etc), some because they believe their way is the only way and their (current) success shows that is indeed the "right" way and the will of gods, some others simply from fear that if they do not so, others coveting what they have will act against them...
Interspersing short vignettes with the past and motivation of quite a few characters outside the main ones works very well and adds to the richness.
However, there were two issues, one I could have maybe overlooked, but one really major, that prevented this novel from being a top tier fantasy for me
- as the author really wants to make this a work of fantasy rather than a sort of alt-history modeled on the warring states of China, he introduces gods who act/do not act (a bit unclear why either) representing the lands of the story, their squabbles and interventions in the mortal world, sometimes just through dreams and prophecies, sometimes more directly; that worked in Homer sure, but doesn't work here as they simply do not integrate well into the story, take quite a lot from it, and not least give a sense of artificial-ness to everything
- the major issue for me though was the writing style; easy to read but very impersonal, chronicle style ("he did that", "she did that", "that happened"); occasionally there are excellent bits of dialogue that show the author can write impressive stuff, but most of the book is way too distant and impersonal for my taste at least"